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I woke up, in my bed
In my pitch black room
My ghostly friend was back
And wanting to play
Her life was taken away
At a very young age
She wakes me
Night after night
Just to play
Like a child wants too
She was so young so pure
She didn't deserve the death
She had to adore
With a gunshot to the head
Just because
Her dad
Was a drunk
And didn't want to hear her cry
All scared of ghost of the night
And now
She is my ghost
In the night
And I welcome her in my home
I'm not afraid
Every soul needs a day
And I'm the one that makes her day
Night after night
And I don't think she will ever go away.
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JokerrLaughs Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
quite a different poem, and its so beautiful. you're a very talented writer.
despite lack of descriptive words, which no one necessarily needs for a poem, you managed to create some graet imagery/
i really love this poem.
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valleigh Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student Writer
I like to make it simple, gives others room to think.
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is a very different poem. I love the concept and it also conveys some emotions. the innocence of the girl, the contrast of ghost to angel and how you react to her and embrace her Love it!
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valleigh Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student Writer
thank you, a friend gave me the idea to write about a ghost and this is what popped into to my head
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well you have a imaginative brain :)
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valleigh Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student Writer
thank you
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome * 2 (for both thank you's)
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valleigh Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Student Writer
what do you mean
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I meant for the thank you on 2 poems :)
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valleigh Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Student Writer
ok
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