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I'm dead now,
And it's my time,
To be cast into the dark hole,
Which leads to hell,
I smell the smoke,
As I fall,
Into the flaming pits of hell,
My life of sin,
Just wasn't forgiven,
When I shut my eyes for good,
I didn't here chimes,
I heard,
I never knew you,
And I slipped off the edge and began my fall.
The dead walks,
There are no graves,
Lost an forgotten,
Entwined with ugly green vines,
I see the evil I feel the heat,
I may not be glad to be here,
But my life had landed me here,
Too late to change anything,
There is no heath,
Just burning ground,
Time to burrow in the hot coals,
And be burnt alive,
No more dawns for me,
Hell fire, is all I will see,
For eternity.
I wrote this for a contest :iconliterature-pros:
#Literature-Pros

, it was hard to do. I did have fun with this and hope to get to do it again.
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:iconstefymoondust:
Stefymoondust Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
i like the poem
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valleigh Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Writer
ok thank you
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KittySib Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
Wow! The imagery is great...made me kinda parched!:D
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:iconvalleigh:
valleigh Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Writer
thank you, I loved the way the contest was set up, it really helped me.
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KittySib Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
cool! :D
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:iconvalleigh:
valleigh Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Writer
;)
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