I love your poem and i love how you set it up, makes it catchy.
It's good to write about the new year, You did good at telling people about it.
Nice and simple is the way to go sometimes, you don't have to be very proper to get the word out.
The impact of this is just to let others know what is going on. This change each year, and it's good to write about what is going on and the way you see it. I wish you the best of luck, and I hope you never give up.